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I hate you so much, I want to kiss you
Until I hurt your core.
I hate you so much, I need to touch you
Until you're weak and sore.
I hate you so much, I'll rip your words out
And throw them to the floor.
My hate for you consumes me
But there's room for so much more.
©2007-2009 ~ElectricCatfish
:iconelectriccatfish:

Author's Comments

It's about feeling a twisted love and loathing for someone. Replace "hate" with "love" in the poem and it wouldn't work; it doesn't in fact work as it is...

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:icondead-skin-on-trial:
wow, that's really good jade, i like it, i like it a lot. xx

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She makes a lot of abstract art, she haggles for the cheapest price, she never orders take-out food before 10 o'clock at night...
:iconelectriccatfish:
*Mary.
But cheers!
Come to Battle of the Bands final next saturday at the Guildhall...we got through! Starts 7pm, costs about £5/£6 and we neeeeed the support.
Love love xx

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POGO
:iconlittleoldme:
OMG....you got thru to the final of battle of the bands?!

awesome.
how?


um well like the above poemage

innit.

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And I Tell Them, I Am The Nightmare, I Am The Pain
:iconalways-fatally-yours:
Scully, dearest, I'm Jade, that's Mary.

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And you wonder, how many times can he wear his heart on his sleeve, without going into cardiac arrest.
:icondead-skin-on-trial:
quiet you. i knew that. *runs and hides*

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She makes a lot of abstract art, she haggles for the cheapest price, she never orders take-out food before 10 o'clock at night...

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